By Emily Cardile
Rough Draft
Twenty Years Ago
Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Chloe who wanted more than anything to be a missionary. She dreamed of all the places she would go and people she would help. She had light brown hair and chocolate brown eyes, but all her childhood she also wanted something else. She wanted blue eyes. And not just the pale, lifeless blue, either. She wanted the bright, exciting blue eyes. She knew this could never happen, so as she got older she learned to accept her brown eyes, even though she secretly longed for her blue ones……
Present Day
Chloe grew up into a beautiful young woman, and was finally old enough to become the missionary she always wanted to be. Christmas time came around, and Chloe was preparing to take a trip to India with presents for some of the women and children. Many people gave her gifts to take with her, and she became more and more excited to take them to India. The time finally came for her to leave, and she couldn’t have been more thrilled. She was able to take hundreds of presents with her to give the people there a good Christmas. Bunches of people donated clothes and shoes, toys and crafts for her to take with her. The plane ride half way around the world seemed to take over a lifetime. When Chloe got to India, she was given the clothes that were the appropriate thing for women to wear. She had to wear the head covering, where all you could see was her eyes, and the skirt, where all you could see was her feet. This didn’t really bother her much, as long as she could do what she came for.
She went to several different villages and towns handing out gifts to the families in need. It made her heart melt to see all their faces light up with excitement, appreciation and happiness. The whole village was bursting at the seams. They all exchanged gifts, and had a big Christmas dinner feast with all they could find and cook up. Everyone danced and sang and played instruments and had a great time together. All the children played together while the adults talked. Chloe was over in India for about a week when the government realized how many Americans and other visitors were in the country, and this frightened them with a fear of being overtaken. So, they started driving out and arresting everyone who wasn’t Indian. Chloe heard about this, and realized she was supposed to be one of the ones to leave, and she felt that her job there was not finished yet. She tried to make sure she didn’t get worried over it, even though she was a little scared. She told herself that everything was going to be ok, and to remain calm.
Then, a group of guards and police interrupted their Christmas party, having everyone come out side and stand in a line. They looked at everyone, and searched all the houses. They knew they could recognize the people to be arrested by having blue or green eyes, because Indian people only have brown eyes, or by the clothes they wore. One of the guards came down the line of people, with a gun at his hip, and eyes piercing like a knife. It was almost Chloe’s turn. Her heart was racing in her chest, a bead of sweat on her forehead. The guard was coming, getting closer and closer, going by person after person, coming towards her. This was it. It was her turn. All the other people in the village knew she wasn’t Indian, and they were as scared as she was. The guard came up to her. All he could see was her eyes. The clothes she wore hid her heavy breathing and the look of pure terror on her face. Remain calm, she thought to herself, although not really helping, it’s going to be alright. She prayed a silent prayer for help. The man looked into her eyes for only a second or two, but to her it felt like hours. They locked eyes for only a moment, then he moved on to the next person in line. Chloe, along with the whole village, let out a sigh of relief with a breath they didn’t realize they were holding in. The guard walked down the rest of the line, not finding anything, then signaled to the other men, and they all got back into their cars and left. Everyone waited until they were a safe distance away before letting out a cheer of joy and thankfulness. Everyone went back to singing and dancing, and everybody thanked God for keeping Chloe safe. Although blue eyes were one of her lifelong dreams, her brown eyes had just saved her life.
A few days later, Chloe returned to her home town. She went to her house and her church and told everyone what had happened and what God had done. The whole congregation celebrated and came up to her asking for details, and what it was like. Chloe now has a great story to be able to tell generations to come about the goodness of God, and what he had done for her. This was a Christmas she would never forget.